Monday, 17 October 2011
This Big Question - Answer
I think that this question has something to do with beliefs. Some people think that there was a path set for them before birth, and some think that they create their own life and future. I believe both ways. I think that there was some sort of idea of what we were going to live like, maybe depending on our family history. But, I also think that we can create our own path by trying or quitting something we do, and either succeed or fail.
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Joyce I agree with you. It really does matter on what the persons beliefs are and that you can also chose the path you want to go on.
ReplyDeleteJoyce, your post is too brief. Before I say anything more, let me advise you right away to add more meat into your post.
ReplyDeleteAlso, remember what Ms. Lees told us, we cannot use the "I" voice, only third person. You can increase the size of your post by adding some examples of how a person has changed his or her stars before, or has tried to and failed. I'm also struggling to interpret the message you are trying to send in your fourth paragraph. Are you trying to say that our path was determined by our family history?
I can tell that you are trying to say that we can or cannot change our stars, but explain more thoroughly why that is so. Try to be more specific in your reasoning, when you say "we can create our own path by trying or quitting something we do, and either succeed or fail," you are being very broad. We can control our path by trying or quitting what? We can succeed or fail in what? Try to be more direct in what you are trying to say.
-David L.